尘埃 发表于 2016-8-3 10:50   全显示 1楼
红心送给作者，感谢参加征文活动

文章内容很刺激，对汪兰淫乱的描写，对情趣服饰的描写，对性爱动作的描写，让人觉得就是一个火爆的场面在眼前，不得不举枪致敬

随心说欲，作者的欲望表露的很直白，写的肯定过瘾。要是能在深度上再提高一下，我想会更好，继续努力！
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