nouthwind26 发表于 2024-6-14 00:45   全显示 1楼
一路看下来，剧情过度的很好，就是进度太慢了，就开始的时候确立了与妹妹的关系，文中出现的阿姨和妈妈看来也是拿下的，应该是标准的后宫，就是十三章了，就在妈妈喝醉的时候才有占便宜的情节，也是老套路了，后续可能会因为今晚的事进一步发展？标题有母子着重写确实没问题，个人觉得还是给其它角色增添点剧情和描写。
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